May 6th 2009

Today i have finished the ESSAY!!!! i did all the work that i had to do and thee teacher showed us what we need like MLA and etc. all i need to do is that and im finished!!!!! i finished everything and i perfecteed it as much as i can so im hoping im going to get a good grade because i have worked very hard...

May 5th 2009

Today i finished the essay but i didnt have the time to analyse it...i fooled around a little but then i got controled and i did my work so i finished the conclusion and the essay is 1,267 words without editing it. so i need to either cut down or add, it depends on what i changed, however, today i also added more information about the variety of jobs. today was an o.k day but i need to analize it by the end of tomorow.

May 4th 2009

Today i finished the variety of jobs paragraph and i wrote some notes down about the conclusion i didnt get to type it but i will be doing that next lesson and i have all the other paragraphs done.
Next lesson i will be planning on :
1) Checking and analysining the essay
2) Finish the conclusion
3) Make the essay the best it can be
4) Shoe mr. bonalie the introduction
And then i will be done

May 3rd 2009

Today i did plenty of work and i think i did great today, so far i have finished the:
Intro
Religon
Government
1/2 Of veriety of jobs
it is 827 words and if i analize it and add the conclusion it will be good and i will have enough words. I think that i need 2 or 1 more lessons to finish this and analize it the way i want it to. Then i will check if i have all the information included in the essay. The plan hasnt changed either it stayed the way it was on monday, i wish i will keep up the good work because i am a little behind but i will catch up if i do the same thing i did in class today for another 2 lessons.

April 29th

Today i finished my religon section and i moved on to government. I started it towards the end of the lesson and thats when i got a littile over hyper but i think i did well today because i finished alot of work and i need to finish the government and everything about senates and etc. i changed the plan making it one big paragraph for each catagory so there will be 5 paragraphs in total: {Into > Religon > Government > Variety of jobs > conclusion} that is the new plan but it will have the same information exept that they will be combined =)

April 28th 2009

Today we started typing the essay and i already made a plan so i followed it and i finished the introductiona and the 1st religon paragraph, although i was talking a little and fooling around i provided some good work at the end of the lesson, when i looked at the cars i did some changes and instead of writting a list of gods i only wrote the 2 most importaant gods in ancient rome and those were Jupiter and Juno. I' m most definatly going to sit by myself because i need to do alot of work and if i sit next to my friends then that gets me to fool around so i will be reminding myself not to sit next to my friends and maybe then i can produce a great essay. =)

Monday 27th 2009

Today i contunued planning but i didnt finish i finished the religon and the intro and half of the governement, i will be doing work at home but before we go there the things i want to write about government are:
1) What are senates, consuls, assembelys? How come women were not allowed to do any of these and what do they do as a society.
2) How was the government in ancient rome ? did it change? If so how and when? Did the government ever get corrupted? When? and much more


So as i was saying i will be finishing this at home because next lesson we will be going to the lab to staart typing this up and the last thing i want to do is to be left behind because if i am not on time then there will be a serious problem, but the amount of work that i had produced in the library and the multimedia lab i tthink i have done great and useful work that i will also include in the essay... i think i did much better this lesson and i am hopeing to be like thios everyday!!! :D